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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改. 1.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在其下面写出该加的词. 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉. 修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分. Dear Tom,      How are you?I am just writing to tell y

2019-05-29

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改. 1.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在其下面写出该加的词. 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉. 修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
 Dear Tom,
      How are you?I am just writing to tell you I had wonderful time at your place in New Year.I arrived home,safely and sound.I have something to ask for you.I have been looking through my bags for my favorite red shirt,or I can't find it anywhere.I'm surely must have left it at your place.Could you look around your house for it?
      By the way,I am planning Mom and Dad's wedding anniversary celebration.I had already invited you and your parent.I wonder whether you would like to come to Chicago this time.How do you think of it?Take care of you and write to me soon.Giving my regards to Uncle Bernard and Aunt Norah.
                                                                      Love,
                                                                      Diana.
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Dear Tom,
      How are you?I am just writing to tell you I had∧wonderful time at your place in New Year.I arrived home,safely and sound.I have something to ask for you.I have been looking through my bags for my favorite red shirt,or I can't find it anywhere.I'm surely I Imust have left it at your place.Could you look around your house for it?
      By the way,I am planning Mom and Dad's wedding anniversary celebration.I had already invited you and your parent.I wonder whether you would like to come to Chicago this time.How do you think of it?Take care of you and write to me soon.Giving my regards to Uncle Bernard and Aunt Norah.

1.加a;短语搭配错误.have a wonderful time玩得很开心.
2.safely改为safe;短语搭配错误.safe and sound平安无事.
3.for去掉;动词短语搭配错误.ask for需要;句意表达的是询问,不需要加介词.
4.or改为but;连词错误.句意表达的是转折,不是选择.
5.surely改为sure;副词错误.be sure确信,有把握.
6.had改为have;时态错误.句意表达的已经完成的动作,要用现在完成时态.
7.parent改为parents;名词错误.父母是两个人,要用复数.
8.How改为What;特殊疑问词错误.what do you think of sth?认为某事怎么样.
9.you改为yourself;代词错误.take care of oneself照顾自己.
10.Giving改为Give;动词错误.句意表达的是请求,是祈使句,要用动词原形来构成.
Dear Tom,
      How are you?I am just writing to tell you I had∧wonderful time at your place in New Year.I arrived home,safely and sound.I have something to ask for you.I have been looking through my bags for my favorite red shirt,or I can't find it anywhere.I'm surely I Imust have left it at your place.Could you look around your house for it?
      By the way,I am planning Mom and Dad's wedding anniversary celebration.I had already invited you and your parent.I wonder whether you would like to come to Chicago this time.How do you think of it?Take care of you and write to me soon.Giving my regards to Uncle Bernard and Aunt Norah.

1.加a;短语搭配错误.have a wonderful time玩得很开心.
2.safely改为safe;短语搭配错误.safe and sound平安无事.
3.for去掉;动词短语搭配错误.ask for需要;句意表达的是询问,不需要加介词.
4.or改为but;连词错误.句意表达的是转折,不是选择.
5.surely改为sure;副词错误.be sure确信,有把握.
6.had改为have;时态错误.句意表达的已经完成的动作,要用现在完成时态.
7.parent改为parents;名词错误.父母是两个人,要用复数.
8.How改为What;特殊疑问词错误.what do you think of sth?认为某事怎么样.
9.you改为yourself;代词错误.take care of oneself照顾自己.
10.Giving改为Give;动词错误.句意表达的是请求,是祈使句,要用动词原形来构成.
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